3nd Edit

I have made the changes to my video and shown it to my focus group.
I have added a page roll into my video. I have placed this on the clip which I was having problems with and I am going to show my focus group to see what they think about it.



. The clip randomly stops 0.18 secs into the video, this could be down to the transition used
. Didn't like the page roll because it didn't fit with the rest of the music video, they suggested to maybe get another clip instead
. Still need to make changes of the clip which was shacking a bit, too either us another clip or try remove the shacking

So I need to make changes to the clip which I was having problems with because this clip is still letting the video down.