4th Edit

I have taken the comments from my focus group and made changes to my video.



. Don't like the first transition 0.14 into the video, because the you can see to clips at once.
. The video still stops 0.18 into the video
. lip sinking is out on one clip
. The transition 2.06 into the video doesn't flow because their is a ghost effect which means you can still see the last clip on the next.
. The shacking of the camera 2.09, needs to be cropped so that is doesn't shack

Hopefully with all these changes it will be my last and final piece. My focus group are happy with my changes to the video.
The clip I had problems with I have taken out because my focus group didn't like it and it didn't fit with the rest of the video. So I have deleted this clip and got another to replace it. I listen to the lyrics and it say " Corner Winds" so I thought a clip of a bird flying would fit well. My focus group are happy with this change and thinks it makes the video look better. I also have changed the second to last clip because I used it at the start, I have filmed a sunset and made it faster so that you can see the whole sun going down. My focus also liked this more.