2nd Edit

I have made changes to my music video from what my focus group said they thought should change.



.Still need to edit the stop motion which is 0.26 secs into the video
.People didnt like my effecting to the clip with is 0.46 secs into the video, they thought it didnt look right and it need changing.
.The random offline clip
.The clip 2.06 into the video shacks too much and the clip is too boring
.Maybe change the second to last clip because it is the same as the first clip

With these comments I have gone back to the computer to make the changes.
I had a problem with one clip in the video because it didnt fit with the rest of the video and seemed too dark, so when I edited it to make it brighter it still didnt look right and my media teacher said it was letting the video down. So i thought maybe get some more footage or try and edit it so it fits.