Magazine Advert

I have started to create my magazine advert for my music video. My focus group has looked at my advert and given comments on the good and bad things:
Likes
. The picture
. The lure of "Best Album of 2011"
. Another lure "includes the UK number one"
. The Black background
Dislikes
. The Picture is boring
. New Album alert people didn't like
. The Album songs on the advert
. The lure of Five Star needs a picture of five stars
. The editing of the picture


I have thought about these comments and created a new advert and this is what it looks like:

My focus group liked this advert and said I should keep it the way it is.