jack johnson sitting waiting wishing (Essay)

I was asked to write an essay on a music video which I like and to analysis the music video in terms of editing,camera work, mise-en-scene, lighting, sounds and presentation. I analysed Sitting,Waiting,Wishing by Jack Johnson who is a well know singer and writer. For this essay i was given a C and to reach a higher grade I needed to use more theory's and technical terms.